[ietf-clear] Re. CLEAR Charter

[Tony Finch]

On Tue, 28 Sep 2004, Matthew Elvey wrote:
>
> Diff:
> http://wiki.fastmail.fm/wiki/index.php/ClearCharter?action=diff

Good stuff: that covers most of the comments I would have made.

I also suggest "This working group will produce techniques for validating these
low-level identities" -- moving "low-level" because the identities are
low-level not the techniques.

>From Matthew's changes I suggest "cross-domain" instead of
"interoperable".

Tony.
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